Good job
LOL! Man you remind me so much of myself when I first started I swear! You got good ideas and melodies, you just don't know how to follow through just yet.
This has a nice feel to it. I like the way it sounds. Although it shouldn't be too slow . . . The intro seems very long. It takes a while for the actual beat to drop. The lil' clap . . . not a very good choice in my opinion. It just doesn't jump the beat off right. Other than a few minor problems this is a nice submission.
Keep it up with your style. When them haters start attackin', you know you hot. just tell em' what I tell em'. ALL HATERS CAN LICK THE INSIDE OF MY ASS. SERIOUSLY. ALL CRITICS TOO CAN SUCK ON MY PROSTATE GLAND. FUCK YOU AND KISS MY ASS! YOU CANT STOP ME BITCHES!
Real muthafuckin talk.
~Holla~
PS- My bad I can get a lil' carried away sometimes. The haters ain't fuckin' with you yet. But they will. And when they find out you associate yourself with me, they gonna hate you! Bring the fire and a rope cuz from now on at NG, we burn and hang haters!